Das Forum der Nefertari

NefertiriQueenofLight · Administrator Beiträge: 355 Ort: Valinor

Okay hier stelle ich jetzt meine (in englisch geschriebene) Geschichte über Königin Nefertari und Ramses rein, aber nachher hat es doch irgendwie was mit HdR zu tun

NefertiriQueenofLight · Administrator Beiträge: 355 Ort: Valinor

Chapter 1: Nefertari and Ramesses II

(1255 b.Chr.)
„ Ptolomäus where is the Pharao?“ a very beautifulwoman asked a servant. The Servant pointed at a hallway that ended in a golden room. The woman smiled at the servant and went trough the hallway. It was full of wall paintings. There was one of the big fight in Qadesh, Syria against the Hethiter. At tat pictures the woman, who’s name was Nefertari Meri-en-Mut smiled. She knew that the pictures where not the truht. They showed her husband Ramesses II. Fighting against many Hethiter with his hands, all alone becasue his Army was circled by the army of the Hethiter. The next thing she saw was Ramesses with many treasures in his hand to show that he won, but the truth was that he almost lost the fight.
When Nefertari reached the golden room Ramesses smiled at her. He was just staring at her in this beautiful egyptian dress.
- She is so beautiful- he thought. And he was right he was very beautiful with her samll brown eyes, well they were similar to the eyes of all egyptian women, but she had long black eyelashes that made her eyes much more beautiful. The Make up showed the weight of the beauty even more. It made her much more beautiful than all egyptian women together. Her eyesbrows were in angular form, but the looked soft and lithely. Her nose fitted perfect in this beautiful face with the high cheekbones and these charming soft, peppy red lips.
Nefertari sat down on the chair in front of Ramesses throne. He stroked her long black hair and her small, dianty and slight shoulders. He loved everything of her every single cm. Her smell was just a dream of red roses for him. She was his favourite wife. He had many wifes but Nefertari was the one he loved the most.
“What is your problem Nefertari? Why are you seecing my company?” he asked. Nefertari smiled at him.
“I though you wanted to know about you future son.” She said and Ramesses smiled at her even more. He was going to be a father again, well he was the father of 50 children but a son of his first mainwife was the best he could think of. He kissed her romantically.
Nefertari loved her husband very much and she loved egypt.
“ Ramesses, where is Amenhirchopschef?” Nefertari asked searching for her eldest son.Ramesses looked around and stood up. He didn’t know it either.
“Ptolomäus!” he yelled and the servent arrived one minute later. He bowed and looked up to Nefertari and Ramesses who were sitting on two thrones.
“Search for our son Amenhirchopschef” Ramesses said and the servant bowed again. Then he ran out of the room.
“Mommy! Sethos hurted Cleopatra!” they heared a girl’s voice yelling through the temple. And then suddenly a girl and a boy ran into the golden room. The girl looked like a younger version of Nefertari cand the boy was a younger Ramesses.
“What’s the matter Meritamun?” Ramesses asked knieling down to her. She was his first daughter, she was like her mother and that was why she was his favourite daughter. Sethos looked at his mother he knew that she would get weak when Ramesses would scream at him.
“Sethos... did you hurt the baby lion?” Ramesses asked. Sethos noddedand looked a bit afraid as his mother.
“ Sethos, how often did I told you you shouldn’t hurt the lion? When you do it again he will perhaps bite you what then? I’m not going to help...” Ramesses began to yell but Nefertari grabbed his hand. She got weak by seeing her little son near tears.
“Calm down Ramesses. Sethos you know that that was wrong?” Nefertari asked her son, who nodded. Nefertari looked at him with a serious face.
“You are not comng with us today, you’ll stay here.” Nefertari said. She was not going to let him go with them to the temple his father was building in Abu Simble. No Sethos cryed and ran away.
“You are to soft with that boy.” Ramesses said to Nefertari. She just looked at Meritamun sitting on Ramesses lab. She smiled at her parents and ran to her room again.
“Ramesses, he is our son, and he is 4 years old.” Nefertari said holding Ramesses hand. She knew that he was way nicer then. He felt comfortable with her. They stood up and walked on the balcony. A light breeze blew through Nefertari’s hair. She felt comfortable with that cause it was a very hot day. Then she looked over the houses of the workers. She saw happy children running around. She saw free women that walked through the streets together and thought bout the fact she had no one. No one to talk with no best friend. Ramesses could feel something was wrong with Nefertari. He turned her round and kissed her. That kiss made her forget her sorrows for a short moment she just thought about the fact that she loved Ramesses and that she had his future son under her heart. She knew it would be a boy, the witch doctor casted a spell over her and Ramesses before they had sex. The spell should garantie that they would get a baby boy.

Netjer Bastet · Dauerschreiber Beiträge: 198 Ort: Ägypten

Was soll ich jetzt dazu sagen?

Never been owned by a black cat?

LilórienCelebgil · Dauerschreiber Beiträge: 100 Ort: End

Dass sie gut ist! Die wird nachher echt spitze!! Und traurig, als dann Nefertari stirbt. *heul*

~Treguna Mekoides Trecorum Satis Dee~

NefertiriQueenofLight · Administrator Beiträge: 355 Ort: Valinor

Chapter 2: We will see us again

(three month later)
Nefertari was 3 month pregneant now but that didn’t hold her back from fighting.
Ramesses sat on his throne. His wifes, excapt Isisnofret and Nefertari, sat in front of the stairs.
They all looked at two women in short golden skirts and golden matallic bras to safe their thorax. They had masks on their faces so no one could see who they were, but all could guess it: Isisnofret and Nefertari.
Then Ramesses clapped his hands twice and the two women turned around with their faces at the wall they had two tridents in their hands and stood there in a fighting position, standing with their back to eachother.
“Ta U!” Ramesses said and with that the fight began. Nefertari and Isisnofret attaced eachother with the tridents. Kling! Kling! The tridens crashed together all the time and with every crash Nefertari got more courage to fight agains Isisnofret, who was 4 years older than her. She fought and fought during the fight she forgot the fact that she was pregnant. Again Isisnofret’s trident came very close to her she bloked it and jumed back a bit. But then she attaced Isisnofret. Now they would decide who would win the first fight. Nefertari attaced Isisnofret again and again but when she turned round Isnofret came from behind and cradded Nefertari’s neck. For the first moment Nefertari didn’t know what to do. But then she kicked Isisnofret right in her face. Isisnofret let her go but then she twisted her leg around and kicked Nefertari on the leg so that Nefertari lost the balance and she fell on the floor.
Nefertari took away her mask. She was shocked, because she didn’t know against whom she was fighting, till now.
“ Jutu Su!( Put on you mask!)” Isisnofret said. Then she smiled underhandedly at Nefertari.
“Ja harada ha dinafida. (It would be a pity for your pretty face)” she said. With these words Nefertari laid her hands on the floor as if she wanted to make a bridge. She got a bit swing and then she jumed up to her feet again, in a way that was very hard to copy. Isisnofret and Nefertari looked in eachothers faces and stood there in a fighting pose again. Then they went on fighting.
Isnofret was almost too good for Nefertari, well she had more practising than Nefertari. Again Isisnofret took away Nefertari’s weapons, but that time Nefertari jumped to a wall in a similar way to Flick Flack. She jumped to a wall and grabbed an ax. Then Isisnofret throw away her tridents right between the legs of two male satues. Then she jumped back too and got a javelin.
Isnofret attacked Nefertari but these time Nefertari could get away. She overjumped Isisnofret who immideately tryed to attack her again but then Nefertari threw away Isisnofrets weapon.
Isisnofret tried to threw away Nefertari’s weapon too but as Isisnofret crabbed for the ax Nefertari had in her hands Nefertari threw Isisnofret over her shoulder on the ground and held the ax right to her neck.
Isisnofret smiled at her.
“Neka tir asi insua, Nefertari. E ue siba i tia. (You learn fast Nefertari, I have to watch out)” she said and smiled underhandedly again. Nefertari looked at her with a serious face.
“Te Ju,...modu e sepi yo pi oway. ( Yes,...me too).” Nefertari said and the smile on Isisnofret’s face dissapeared. Then Ramesses stood up and smiled at both of them.
“Pe U Pe U (Good, Good)” he said and went to his two wifes. The fight was over and Nefertari won.

Then Ramesses walked with Nefertari and their Children to the temple of Abu Simbel. Nefertari liked that temple very much she liked the satues of her husband and the wall paintinggs even talked about their children. And then Ramesses went with them to a smaller temple. It was for his wife and Hathor.
“You buid a temple just for me?” she asked him and kissed him. “ And a tomb in the valley of queens. Right beside Nefertiri and Nofretete.” Ramesses said and Nefertari smiled even more. A tomb beside Nofretete and Nefertiti that was great. That showed how much Ramesses was in love with her. On a pillar stood something Ramesses wrote for her.
“My love is unique- no one can rival her, for she is the most beautiful woman alive. Just by passing, she has stolen away my heart.”

(Six month later)
Nefertari was now at the end of her pregnancy she and Ramesses loved eachother even more, what the other wifes of Ramesses didn’t like that much. Isisnofret was very ugly to Nefertari and Nefertari knew that if Ramesses or the Medjai would go away for one secound Isisnofret would kill her. They didn’t like eachother, even Ramesses knew that.
One morning the baby boy wanted to come to life. But Nefertari had prolems she was too old to bear another child.
“Ptolomäus call the witch doctor we have problems!” a midwife yelled through the room. Nefertari had big problems. Ramesses ran to the bearing room he knew that Nefertari could die. Nefertari felt an terrible pain inside of her. And there was no way to stop the pain. She felt so bad so weak. When the witch doctor came he took Nefertari’s hand he looked at her and closed his eyes. Then he looked at her and got tears in his eyes. He looked at Ramesses and he knew what the doctor wanted to say.
“Nai!(No!) ” he yelled. Nefertari looked into Ramesses eyes. She was so waek and every pain and push made her weaker. Then she felt a horrible pain again. The boy was born. But now Nefertari got tired and cold.
“I love you Ramesses but I’m so tired I can’t fell my feet anymore. Watch out for our boy, and for our other children. We will see eachother again, I promise. I love you....” Nefertari closed her eyes.
“No!No! Wake up! Wake up! Don’t leave me!” Ramesses screamed in pain. His only real love died. He couldn’t believe it. He loved her so much and now she was dead.
“You’ll see her again. She was true.” The witch doctor said but Ramesses just looked at him in a very mad way.
“You, just leave this land or you’ll be dead!” Ramesses yelled at him.
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Was Nefertari right would they meet again? Where, when and would they love eachother again?

~Ciascuno é tanto infelice quanto esso crede~

Netjer Bastet · Dauerschreiber Beiträge: 198 Ort: Ägypten

Das ist wirklich gut... Aber kannst du nicht auf Deutsch schreiben? Das ist so anstrengend...

Never been owned by a black cat?

NefertiriQueenofLight · Administrator Beiträge: 355 Ort: Valinor

Das ist doch schon fertig und ich hab keine lust das alles zu übersetzen

~Ciascuno é tanto infelice quanto esso crede~

Netjer Bastet · Dauerschreiber Beiträge: 198 Ort: Ägypten

Sei doch nicht so faul

Never been owned by a black cat?

NefertiriQueenofLight · Administrator Beiträge: 355 Ort: Valinor

Doch weil das zu viel ist.

~Ciascuno é tanto infelice quanto esso crede~

NefertiriQueenofLight · Administrator Beiträge: 355 Ort: Valinor

Chapter 3: The prophercy

(3100 years after Nefertari’s dead)

A few scientist found many tombs in the valley of queens and in the valley of kings. They found the tombs of Tutancamun, Ramesses,Nofretete and Nefertari. The Hyroglyphs in every tomb showed the life of the persons that where buried there, but not Nfertari’s tomb. It showed Nefertari between gods and it showed the deep sorrow Ramesses felt when she passed away.
“ That is the best tomb we found here” a scientist said to the press. But in that time they didn’t pay so much attantion to the scientist and egypt.
“We also found some old papyrus texts that are in a very good condition. In a few month we could have a deeper view in the life of the egyptian Kings.” He said. But the scientist forgot about egypt and that was why these piece of payrus was tranlated 136 years later.
Amun Sarameh was an egyptian archaeologist she was a expert for the valley of queens. She was the one who translated the papyrus textes.
“The child that will be born 3236 years after Nefertari’s dead in the thrid cycle of the moon. Will be the reincarnation of the beloved queen.Howerver she has to be born right in front of Nefertari’s tomb.She will egypt help beck to it‘s old strength. You all will see her for she has a sighn of Isis on her body.
That is what the papyrus said.” Amun said to the press. All looked at her puzzled. Many of them didn’t know who Nefertari was. So Amun had to explain.
“Nefertari was the first wife of the famouse egyptian pharao Ramesses II. She was his favourite one and she beared him 6 children from whom we know 2 names: Meritamun and Amenhirchopschef.” Amun said and the press asked some silly questions like.
“Do you believe in these provercy? I see your pregnant your child could be the reincarnation too.” Amun just nodded no because she knew she would get twins.

(three month later)
Amun was working in the tomb of Nefertari right at the sarcophagus of Nefertari.Suddenly the pain she had felt the whole day long got mor and more. Mauns best friend Isa called for a doctor. “She is in labour!” Isa yelled. Then a doctor rushed to Amun and Isa. It was a horrible pain, cause it was Amuns first birth she didn’t have other children she was just 20. Isa ran to a tent near the tomb there was a telephone she calles Armet-Bei Sarameh, Amun’s husband. He wanted to be with her when the two little babys would come to life.
Amun felt pain, but the doctor helped her to get over it with a medizine. Amun pushed and pushed it went darker and the moon stood right above the tomb. Then the first twin came out. It was a little boy. And then the secound baby came. It was a little girl. They called the babys Hirchop and Teti. Both had a strange birthmark on their necks it was a little bit like the sighn that stood for Hathor the ball with the two horns at the site, but wasn’t that the sighn of Isis too? There was just a little thing that seperated them the sighn of Isis had no angular form of the horns, but the sighn of Hathor had. They didn’t care bout that so much. But when Hirchop and Teti got 2 years old the young family moved to Northamerica, to Los Angles. Amun and Armet-Bei bought an egyptian restaurant, they both gave up their old jobs as archaeologists.

~Ciascuno é tanto infelice quanto esso crede~